I want to say that overall the photograph is stunning.
I gave you a 5 for vision, because I it clearly shows the theme you wanted, "In Bloom". The single flower that has bloomed, and the flower buds in the background work, when displaying the idea of the flowers begining to bloom.
I gave you 4.5 on technique because, the way the background fades allowing the flower to stand out among all the green leaves, and the other addittions of purple from the buds. At the same time when I look up at the part above the right side of the flower, the buds and the leaves begin to sort of fade together, and it distracts from the flower since it's a larger area that's so close to the flower itself.
I gave you a 5 for impact, because I overall liked this picture, because you where able to get a good upclose shot of the flower. Which showed all the detail and natural color that the flower had to offer. And you where able to make it look even more stunning with the use of the background.
Great photo! I represent the Austin South SDA Church, and I was wondering if you would give us permission to use the photograph in our church services as a background, is that all right with you?
I gave you a 5 for vision, because I it clearly shows the theme you wanted, "In Bloom". The single flower that has bloomed, and the flower buds in the background work, when displaying the idea of the flowers begining to bloom.
I gave you 4.5 on technique because, the way the background fades allowing the flower to stand out among all the green leaves, and the other addittions of purple from the buds. At the same time when I look up at the part above the right side of the flower, the buds and the leaves begin to sort of fade together, and it distracts from the flower since it's a larger area that's so close to the flower itself.
I gave you a 5 for impact, because I overall liked this picture, because you where able to get a good upclose shot of the flower. Which showed all the detail and natural color that the flower had to offer. And you where able to make it look even more stunning with the use of the background.
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